~*Im Your Guardian Angel*~ by ~*Wilbur's Angel*~
A 14-year old girl flew downward from the sky. She had white angel wings on her back, a glowing golden halo above her head, and wore a white and blue sleeve-less, spaghetti strap dress. She wore golden bracelets on her wrists, and her ankles, and was barefoot. She wore her long, dark brown-ish hair in two twisted ponytails, with hair bands on the ends.
Angie gasped seeing what appeared to be a boy in his teens jumping from a balcony ledge, falling to the wide ocean below.
She flew as quickly as she could, and grabbed him gently but firmly. She put him down once they reached a safe point of the balcony floor.
Why did you save me?, the teenager spoke coldly.
Angie was taken back from his tone.
Because its my job., she replied when she caught a glimpse of his face. And, unknown to him, it was the truth.
Your job?, the teen boy was confused.
I will only tell you the truth if you tell me why you were trying to jump off the balcony., the boy sighed hearing her words.
Im unhappy with my life. Its too painful for me to bear my life anymore., the girl was taken back.
Life is hard for everyone!! That doesnt mean you should go and kill yourself you know!!, she snapped at him.
You dont understand.
Well, at least tell me so I can try to understand.
Theres a girl
that I was in love with but she died unexpectedly.
Oh
Im sorry., she placed a hand on his shoulder.
Its okay, you didnt do it.
Angie suddenly felt herself being pulled back into the sky.
Wait!!, the boy yelled, his hand out reaching for hers.
She held her hand out, too, but they were too far apart.
Im your guardian angel!! Thats why I saved you!!, she yelled.
The boy was surprised upon her words but then smiled, tears rolling down his cheeks.
Thank you!!, the boy yelled back.
Angie smiled, tears fell from her eyes as well.
The boy gazed into her eyes, and though far away, he recognized them immediately.
The boy gasped, suddenly realizing why her eyes seemed so familiar...
That's her
she was the girl I loved
, the boy whispered to himself.
I love you!!, the boy yelled.
She smiled even more, as she completely disappeared from his view, and entering Heaven.
~*The End!*~















Comments
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"Around here, however, we don't look backwards for very long. We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things... and curiosity keeps leading us down new paths." - Walt Disney
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"Creativity is the most expressive way to express yourself." -Angie(Wilbur's Angel) :
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At the beginning u repeat "She wore" too much
and also the part "taken back" altho u only used it twice.
The ending is just slightly too sudden... maybe u should've explained they boy's thoughts before he said I love u
still awesome tho ^^ *adds favorite*
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"Creativity is the most expressive way to express yourself." -Angie(Wilbur's Angel) :
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"Creativity is the most expressive way to express yourself." -Angie(Wilbur's Angel) :
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